Raven: The Beginning - An Assassin LitRPG (World of the Veil Book 1)

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'What's the worst that could happen?' is what I thought to myself as I entered the World of the Veil with a new, experimental machine that the company created. I was originally excited to participate in their alpha test, and now, looking back, I was just a naive little girl that didn't know what it was like to truly suffer.

Sarah was one of the world's best assassin players, but she wasn't prepared for getting stuck as a low-level player in a new game. Suddenly she has to struggle just to survive against the monsters of the world, while also keeping her secret from the authorities. What happens when the killing, and the consequences, are just too real?


My Opinion: 186 pages, $2.99, Available on Kindle Unlimited

The story is ok. There are small math and game mechanics errors. But mostly it is just an XP and quest grind mixed in with a bland stuck in the game element that isn't developed. I mean the MC groups with other players but never thinks to mentions she is stuck in the game? Still, as the story progresses it gets better with more interesting assassin abilities, and themed quests and storylines but never quiet hits good for me.

Score: 6 out of 10

Raven: The Beginning - An Assassin LitRPG (World of the Veil Book 1)

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