Tower of Damnation (A LitRPG and GameLIT Saga): Book Three: Abyss

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After defeating his enemies in a glorious battle, Bradley was awarded by General Fluxi himself. His name spread throughout Arcana, reaching even the doors of those residing safely in the Capital of the Nine Nations. With such a grandiose display, the Dark Races quickly unveiled just who their nemesis was, and they wanted vengeance. Now stationed in the grueling deserts of Arcana, Bradley must fend off against the Dark Races, all while watching for an abrupt attack from behind. How will he survive his dire straits?


My Opinion: 190 pages, $2.99, Available On Kindle Unlimited


This time the story just didn't work for me. It lost most of the LitRPG progression I liked (5% of the story), once it was past the beginning chapters. Most of the story also didn't have the MC doing very much besides talking to himself and training the battalion he was assigned. There's some good large scale action (about 15% of the story) late in the novel but the scale of the story grew to include hundreds of soldiers that muddled up the story. 


It's not a bad story but I enjoyed the smaller solo action adventure plotline from previous books more. I just did not care about all the time spent with the soldiers the MC trained, their backstories, or plotlines. The story also seemed to have lost both the tower climbing and the regressor aspects.


Score: 6 out of 10

Tower of Damnation (A LitRPG and GameLIT Saga): Book Three: Abyss

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