My name is Dahlia Otou, and I’m 16 years old. I left everything behind to join Tol Online, the world’s most popular VRMMORPG.
My parents are dead, and I only have one option left: join Tol’s most dangerous realm and fight for survival. But my plan goes haywire when my greatest asset is nerfed by the game’s AI.
Now, I have to recover the pieces of a powerful family heirloom, cleave through bloodthirsty baddies, and trade every scrap of loot I can find before I am arrested and forced to pay off my father’s debt.
Easy, right?
Perfect for fans of Ready Player One by Ernest Cline and Ascend Online by Luke Chmilenko!
THIS BROKEN SWORD is Episode 1 of the SERIALIZED YA GAMELIT LIT RPG saga, TOL Online. Each episode is between 20K and 35K words.
My Opinion: 98 pages, $2.99, Available On Kindle Unlimited
Review written by Ian Mitchell
Hunter as grinder
For a novella It does a decent job of establishing the MC and get her in the game. Where she has some decent NPC interactions, she doesn't talk to humans much. I enjoyed and would gladly read more episodes.
Score: 8.2 out of 10